From: jmc <jmc@openbsd.org>
Date: Thu, 6 Apr 2017 18:55:42 +0000 (+0000)
Subject: less chatty EXAMPLES; from anton lindqvist
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less chatty EXAMPLES; from anton lindqvist
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diff --git a/sbin/bioctl/bioctl.8 b/sbin/bioctl/bioctl.8
index 3b6e66d1eb5..d807f465e64 100644
--- a/sbin/bioctl/bioctl.8
+++ b/sbin/bioctl/bioctl.8
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-.\"	$OpenBSD: bioctl.8,v 1.103 2016/11/27 18:04:18 stsp Exp $
+.\"	$OpenBSD: bioctl.8,v 1.104 2017/04/06 18:55:42 jmc Exp $
 .\"
 .\" Copyright (c) 2004, 2005 Marco Peereboom
 .\"
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@
 .\" OUT OF THE USE OF THIS SOFTWARE, EVEN IF ADVISED OF THE POSSIBILITY OF
 .\" SUCH DAMAGE.
 .\"
-.Dd $Mdocdate: November 27 2016 $
+.Dd $Mdocdate: April 6 2017 $
 .Dt BIOCTL 8
 .Os
 .Sh NAME
@@ -279,16 +279,14 @@ rather than
 This option cannot be used during the initial creation of the crypto volume.
 .El
 .Sh EXAMPLES
-The following command, executed from the command line, would configure
-the device softraid0 with 4 special devices
-(/dev/sd2e, /dev/sd3e, /dev/sd4e, /dev/sd5e) and
-a RAID level of 1:
+Configure softraid0 with 4 special devices
+(/dev/sd2e, /dev/sd3e, /dev/sd4e, /dev/sd5e)
+and a RAID level of 1:
 .Bd -literal -offset 3n
 # bioctl -c 1 -l /dev/sd2e,/dev/sd3e,/dev/sd4e,/dev/sd5e softraid0
 .Ed
 .Pp
-The following command, executed from the command line, would configure the
-device softraid0 with one special device (/dev/sd2e) and an encrypting
+Configure softraid0 with one special device (/dev/sd2e) and an encrypting
 volume:
 .Bd -literal -offset 3n
 # bioctl -c C -l /dev/sd2e softraid0
@@ -302,8 +300,7 @@ zeroed, so tools like
 .Xr fdisk 8
 or
 .Xr disklabel 8
-don't get confused by the random data that appears on the new disk.
-This can be done with the following command (assuming the new disk is sd3):
+don't get confused by the random data that appears on the new disk:
 .Bd -literal -offset 3n
 # dd if=/dev/zero of=/dev/rsd3c bs=1m count=1
 .Ed
@@ -314,7 +311,7 @@ For example:
 # bioctl -d sd2
 .Ed
 .Pp
-The following command starts a rebuild of the degraded softraid volume sd0
+Start a rebuild of the degraded softraid volume sd0
 using a new chunk on wd0d:
 .Bd -literal -offset 3n
 # bioctl -R /dev/wd0d sd0